Review: Alpha Instinct

Posted February 22, 2012 by Gikany-Una in 3 stars, Paranormal Romance, Rating B, Reviews Tags: , , ,

Alpha Instinct
Author: Katie Reus 
Release Date: Feb. 7, 2012
Publisher: Signet
Moon Shifter #1
ISBN: #978-0451236098
Genre: Paranormal Romance
Format(s): Paperback (368 pgs), e-book
Book Source: Publisher

About the book:

      Fear has a scent. So does desire…
Ana Cordona has been a strong leader for the lupine shifters who survived after all the males and most of the females in her pack were mysteriously poisoned. As tough as she is, with no Alpha male, the pack is vulnerable to the devious shifter Taggart, who wants to claim both their ranch and Ana as his own. When Connor Armstrong comes back into her life, promising protection, it’s almost enough to make Ana forget how he walked out on her before—and reluctantly accept his offer to mate.
      The minute Connor sees Ana again, it reawakens a raw hunger. He must have her for his bondmate—his wolf cries out for it. But his human side knows he must proceed with caution because of their complicated past. If he is to truly have her body and soul, he must go beyond his burning desire and win back her heart. Whatever it takes, he is determined not to leave her side again.
      But Taggart and his rival pack are not their only enemies. A human element in town is targeting shifters. Their plan not only threatens Ana and Connor’s future, but the lives of the entire pack…

What G & U are talking about:

      Alpha Instinct is the debut novel in the Moon Shifter series.  It is an interesting blend of urban fantasy within a somewhat contemporary romance.  Although Gikany and Una enjoyed it, there are some issues we hoped are simply “debut-itis” factors.
      Sometimes a novel will warm you up and slowly get you into the world and the “conflict.”  This is not one of them; we begin with Ana facing off with the rival pack adjacent to hers.  Alpha Instinct wastes no time in showing that pack politics are not all they are cracked up to be.  Gikany and Una enjoyed the weight of politics and the war of perceptions and prejudices that seem to permeate the world that Ana lives in. The idea that there is a overall council that governs the pack is very interesting as it is balanced between the notion that a pack (and most importantly its alpha) must be able to protect their own.  Going to the council for assistance is truly a double-edged sword – they may help you, but if in the process of helping you, they feel you are unable to be a pack, they will then assimilate you into other packs.  The distrustful feelings that permeate the interactions between different established packs and between humans and packs add to the drama and mystery of who the “big bad” is.  The “whodunit” aspect of the novel is gripping and was well woven into the overall pace of the novel.  The reader ends up suspecting everyone, which keeps you on pins and needles until the very end.
      Two great examples of the overwhelming reality of prejudices are the relationship of Ana and Vivian and between Ana and Kaya and her son Matt.  Ana is a wolf shifter and Vivian is a young jaguar cub.  Ana treats Vivian as if she is her own child, not just one of the pack, which is an oddity.  Since Vivian is a jaguar, the fear that Ana would reject her or worse, kill her for trespassing, forces Connor to keep her a secret from Ana.  Combine this with the friendship Ana has with Kaya and Matt Dunlauex (two humans), and you can see Ana’s perceptions change.  She didn’t realize that her friendship with the Dunlauxes was mutual, nor what the friendship would mean to her and her pack.  Watching the development of Ana and Vivian’s close bond and the continued friendship between Kaya and Matt gives the foundation in the novel for the future books that will show this pack is one that wants to change the insufferable weight of prejudice in this world.
      We have enjoyed novels with more than one POV (point of view).  However, you can have too many in one novel.  Alpha Instinct is a prime example of a novel with way too many POVs.  After much discussion, Gikany and Una feel that the enemy POVs were unnecessary and bogged the novel down.  The information gleaned in them could have been conveyed in a different matter without changing POVs and slowing down the story.  There were some instances that were just not necessary (for example, we have the POV of a big bad that dies…which made his previous POVs completely unnecessary – we don’t NEED to connect to him… he’s the bad dude, we won’t feel pity for him, not that he deserved any…creepy dude that he is).  The “big bad” can be conveyed just fine through the eyes of our heroes and heroines.  We do have four POVs of our good guys group and that was okay since two will be our “couple” in the next novel.
      Another issue is our lack of connection to the main couple.  They had a previous attraction to each other and then Connor split…for no reason that Ana could see.  We are just expected to accept that they are intended bondmates.  But we never truly felt the connection between them.  It was as if the preexisting relationship/interactions was the justification.  But since we didn’t experience it, the relationship between the two main characters in the book was hollow.  It seemed like a cheat to get out of having to develop the main characters and most importantly their connection to one another.  As the reader, you just do not feel the emotional ties between them.
      The shapeshifter mythology was slightly lacking.  We know they are packs, some of the natures of shifters, but we do not get any background or foundation on how the mythology is based or how it works.  We just have to accept the dribs and drabs of information as they come to us.  It’s shallow and somewhat vague.  Perhaps in the next novel, more of the nature and mythology will come to light.  Plus we have a stronger connection to the couple in the next book because we have watched them meet and interact in this book. The foundation is laid and we cannot wait to see what transpires between Liam and December.
      All in all, this is an enjoyable read but it did lack the depth and convictions that the foundation a more polished novel would accomplish.  The transitions between scenes were a little jumpy, due in large part to having too many POVs.  We had stronger connections to the supporting characters than the main characters.  But all that withstanding, Gikany and Una look forward to reading Primal Possession due out later this year and recommend you pick up Alpha Instinct.

Their Rating:

Liked it, but had some issues – recommend (B)
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3 responses to “Review: Alpha Instinct

  1. Una

    It is enjoyable, don’t get us wrong, but the foundation has truly been laid for the next book and we are REALLY eager for it. Sometimes with series the first book is a set up and that is the feel we got from this book. Did we enjoy reading it, yes, but it left us drooling for the next book.

  2. […] Posted by Gikany-Una on Aug 28, 2012 in 3.5 stars, paranormal romance, Rating B, reviews | 2 comments | Tags: G-U Review, Katie Reus, Moon Shifters, shifters, Signet Primal Possession Author: Katie Reus  Release Date: Sept. 4, 2012 Publisher: Signet Moon Shifter #2 ISBN: #978-0451237781 Genre: Paranormal Romance Format(s): Paperback (362 pgs), e-book Book Source: Publisher About the book:       To protect her, he will unleash the beast within…        As his pack’s second-in-command, lupine shifter Liam Armstrong gives orders and takes what he wants—until he meets red-headed, blue-eyed December McIntyre. Liam knows the human beauty is his intended mate the moment he sees her, but December is far too strong-willed to accept his protection.       December, whose brother is the town sheriff, has every reason to mistrust shifters after one killed her youngest sibling. But the forceful and handsome Liam has gotten under her skin in a way she hadn’t thought possible, and the desire she feels for him is almost too much to bear.       When a radical hate group targets all humans known to sympathize with paranormal beings, December is attacked in her bookstore. Reluctantly, she turns to the only one who can help her: Liam. And he is going to take her to places within herself she never knew existed. What G & U are talking about:       Primal Possession is the second release in the Moon Shifter series by Katie Reus. Gikany and Una had a few issues with the previous book, and we are happy to say that some of those issues were absent in this book.  There are a few pet peeves in the novel but overall we enjoyed it and thought it was good.       In Alpha Instinct we were introduced to December and Liam.  Ever since their meeting, Gikany and Una have been eager to read this book.  We enjoyed their interactions and the obstacles that they would eventually need to overcome and we could not wait to see it play out.  In Primal Possession we see it play out and although it doesn’t go exactly as we thought, it was still enjoyable. Their interactions were heartfelt and intriguing.  Their passion and desire for each other was palpable. We would be doing a disservice if we did not mention that Liam and December’s romance just steams off the pages (Una had to wear contacts so her glasses didn’t fog up).       However, we felt there are a few moments where December seemed a bit weak, always listening and doing as her brother or Liam directed.  Though she would rankle, she still would go along with them.  However at the end of the novel she seemed to have gained some strength in her backbone.  There is a scene…it’s a total spoiler so we won’t tell you it, but it was just brilliant! With December’s past overshadowing her and Liam’s protective instincts going “stupid”, it was satisfying to see them work it out.       The pace of the Primal Possession was simple and flowed nicely.  It’s not overly complex; the clues are there to figure most of the plot out.  However, it is the interactions and the mythology of the world that keeps us fascinated.  The introduction of the Fae was thoroughly intriguing. We were surprised at how powerful they are and we are eager to see what type of role they will play.  Also, with the mention of vampires, we are anxious to see them play a part in this series as well.  Gikany and Una enjoy how in the Moon Shifter series that the world isn’t just unwrapped and handed to us. We are slowly immersed as if on a need-to-know basis. It helps to give the paranormal an air of mystery which we enjoy.       Thankfully there were not too many point-of-views (POVs) in this novel.  It was very easy to follow and those POVs we had were integral to the plot and character development.  We loved how we are given the foundation and introduction in Primal Possession for the couple in the next book, Mating Instinct.  If you are interested there is a teaser chapter at the end.  One element that is mentioned and seems to be an ingrained issue is the reoccurrence of men leaving to “protect” their woman or for their own good. Your mate is in danger and you leave so she will be safe, just seems so idiotic (which, Erin, a female shifter so eloquently points out).  We cannot wait to see Erin’s story, by the way.       Even with the few pet peeves, we liked Primal Possession better than Alpha Instinct.  Gikany and Una enjoyed Liam and December’s story and look forward to reading about Jayce and Kat’s story in Mating Instinct.  Considering what transpired in Primal Possession we may receive third degree burns from just holding the book!  As preparing for this review, we found that there is a 1.5 novella in the Moon Shifter series.  Needless to say, we are going to pick it up and check it out.  However, we didn’t notice anything while reading Primal Possession that hinted at us missing something.  So feel free to jump in with Alpha Instinct if you enjoy paranormal romance, and especially hot shifters. Their Rating: Liked it – recommend (B+) Enter to Win: Contest from Aug. 28 – Sept. 2, 2012  Purchase Info: Primal Possession: Moon Shifter #2 Reviews in the Series: Alpha Instinct (Book 1)  […]